Sunday, May 12, 2019
A Destiny Unknown Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I'm dancing in the rain
stepping in the puddles
my feet are soaking wet
the future is muddled
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Carl Roussell
12 May 2019
I like how the poem changes from the seemingly happy start to one of questioning, and when you reach your destination may you land gently.
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Aqua Flower
12 May 2019
The poem depicts the emotional rollercoaster of it all. Thank you for reading.
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7/21/2025 5:19:47 PM # 1.0.0
You are smiling for the choices are all yours. Its not every day an umbrella takes you flying. Good luck.
Lyn thank you for encouraging words and for this very nice comment! Have a wonderful day!