Tuesday, June 21, 2016

A Desperate Will Comments

Rating: 5.0

High caliber verse,
its cartridge hand loaded

A new target centered,
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 June 2016

Beautiful flow of the verse is rich in rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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