A Desperate Heart Comments

A Johnny Cash song would be so inappropriate here. But I got to sing it anyway. It expresses how it feels: 'Flushed From The Bathroom Of Your Heart' No romantic was he. Tom

WOW! This poem is awesome! The last part is amazing. Most people think life is about the 'stuff', when it's really about the people. This is one of the best poems I have ever read and I'd like to put it down as a favorite.

This is expressing the sorrow and sadness to the reader's heart. It's like a gloomy picture of depression occurring between autumn and winter.

Such a great idea for a poem, and so nicely put together: imagery very good, great words, great felings! Therefore, A great poem!

I felt the poem almost formulaic until the question you pose at the end. And I found that a VERY interesting juxtaposition. In a way, I agree with Uriah. But of course, the distraught woman's emotions, transmuted some day, will bring a rich harvest.

It sound like both are bankrupt to a certain degree.

i guess if i had the money to buy a week's worth of coffee i'd give her some....and yes, my hands do. My heart is the same way.