Wednesday, July 15, 2009

A Desperate Cry Comments

Rating: 4.3

God's creation
Blessed to be born in this world
We all may feel that's the truth
Until I read this-
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Vijay Sai R
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Congratulations, dear poet. This poem is now at #62 in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets

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This poignant poem stands rated at #62 today among the BEST POEMS OF MEMBER POETS….

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Let this never happen anywhere, to anyone….. Loka Samasta Sukhino Bhavantu …

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 28 September 2023

Without mincing a word! Hauntingly painful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019

Looking eager to end its hunger! I pray! Save these innocents! Let this never happen again! ......yes, let this never happen again! So moving.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019

God's creation Blessed to be born in this world We all may feel that's the truth.....so touching and true.A beautiful poem is so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Haruna Garba 02 April 2019

That is south SUDAN. The could be more elsewhere. I saw it too. Appealing to the senses this piece is!

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 July 2018

Beautiful sentiments

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Brian Markey 30 May 2018

While those with far more than they need become obese they still manage to waste water and vast amounts of food. while those without starve and die of thirst? We have more than enough resources to go round we just can't be bothered doing it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 February 2018

Verily, the so called globalisation, civilization of our earth, has yet to solve the problem of poverty and human suffering. A poem to be read and comprehended

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Rajnish Manga 07 June 2017

Oh! What a sad and painful portrayal of an abandoned baby who is fighting for survival. Thanks. An abandoned baby / Malnourished, hardly an year old Famine struck / Skin and bone / No food to feed No water to have / Stranded alone in barren land

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Rajendran Muthiah 03 June 2017

The condition of the abandoned and thrown away babies is given a heart moving touch by the poet. I think no poet has given this much of appeal. Excellent Vijay Sai.

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Tyrone Allen 28 February 2017

beautiful poem i loved it!

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Bharati Nayak 13 November 2016

It is really a heart touching poem.I sometimes visit an orphanage nearby and have seen children who are abandoned by their parents.I question how on earth a mother or father can leave their children? I have also seen mothers having skeleton like bodies with their skeleton like babies hanging on their backs beg at busy streets or crossings.I ask myself what drives these mothers to bring such little babies under harsh sun, polluted crossings? Poverty and social ostracisation may be two major causes which force parents to leave babies.But we and our Governments should join hands to see that every child should get proper nutrition, education and care to grow and live in the world.

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Bankim Let 17 October 2016

stark reality.nice composition

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 15 October 2016

So grassing. very much intense with human feelings. good work, man.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 October 2016

We all feel truth here, and truth is as good as life.

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Benjamin Wiche 23 August 2016

Add no more, God show mercy for this sore our soul need not see God show mercy.... nice one

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2015

The earth is full of the negative works of mankind. Nice work.

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Anish Debnath 14 October 2015

god's creation is a blessing. But depending on where we are born, somebody could continue with blessings somebody with curse It is really a hard truth of feelings reflecting in your verse. Thanks for sharing.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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