A Desperate Cry Comments

Congratulations, dear poet. This poem is now at #62 in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets

This poignant poem stands rated at #62 today among the BEST POEMS OF MEMBER POETS….

Let this never happen anywhere, to anyone….. Loka Samasta Sukhino Bhavantu …

Without mincing a word! Hauntingly painful

Looking eager to end its hunger! I pray! Save these innocents! Let this never happen again! ......yes, let this never happen again! So moving.

God's creation Blessed to be born in this world We all may feel that's the truth.....so touching and true.A beautiful poem is so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

That is south SUDAN. The could be more elsewhere. I saw it too. Appealing to the senses this piece is!

Beautiful sentiments

While those with far more than they need become obese they still manage to waste water and vast amounts of food. while those without starve and die of thirst? We have more than enough resources to go round we just can't be bothered doing it.

Verily, the so called globalisation, civilization of our earth, has yet to solve the problem of poverty and human suffering. A poem to be read and comprehended

Oh! What a sad and painful portrayal of an abandoned baby who is fighting for survival. Thanks. An abandoned baby / Malnourished, hardly an year old Famine struck / Skin and bone / No food to feed No water to have / Stranded alone in barren land

The condition of the abandoned and thrown away babies is given a heart moving touch by the poet. I think no poet has given this much of appeal. Excellent Vijay Sai.

beautiful poem i loved it!

It is really a heart touching poem.I sometimes visit an orphanage nearby and have seen children who are abandoned by their parents.I question how on earth a mother or father can leave their children? I have also seen mothers having skeleton like bodies with their skeleton like babies hanging on their backs beg at busy streets or crossings.I ask myself what drives these mothers to bring such little babies under harsh sun, polluted crossings? Poverty and social ostracisation may be two major causes which force parents to leave babies.But we and our Governments should join hands to see that every child should get proper nutrition, education and care to grow and live in the world.

stark reality.nice composition

So grassing. very much intense with human feelings. good work, man.

We all feel truth here, and truth is as good as life.

Add no more, God show mercy for this sore our soul need not see God show mercy.... nice one

The earth is full of the negative works of mankind. Nice work.

god's creation is a blessing. But depending on where we are born, somebody could continue with blessings somebody with curse It is really a hard truth of feelings reflecting in your verse. Thanks for sharing.