A Desparate Plea Comments

most wonderful write across the memory of earthquake tolling dearth and homeless, really ingenious yet poignant, heart felt......,

this is a wonderful pome expressing the true emotions of a girl about to die and not understanding whats going on in the world around her...simply amazing! ! !

simply amazing poem, very nice diction and imagery.Thanks for sharing.

a masterpiece showing stark reality and suffering!

awesome....Syeda you packed such a powerful punch in these lines its like almost being trapped there with the harried soul.....some imagery... fluent diction and superb grasp...good job at rhyming over all solid and very very readable...write more often be proud of this effort its a tenner cheers

Life is there........ and there is room for havocs... pains... love... tears... and so on and death too! ! nice work friend! 10.. Ali