Thursday, March 29, 2012

A Despairing Glance! Comments

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When the pimps charmed him
to pass time till morning
in the haven near the bus-station,
he walked in hanging his head.
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Rajendran Muthiah
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Richard Ponsonby 10 April 2020

What wicked mysogynistic crap. You should hang your head in shame and may your self-righteous opinionated views condemn you to perditiion

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2020

He sent his children to his mother's care. Before the virulence of that vice infects his grown-up golden girls, he chopped of the head of that vamp, put it in a bag and surrendered it to the police. His sainted hands were not tainted by that murder. conclusion of the poem.. very good poem. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 April 2020

It's a psychological matter, sadistic expression, well story through a pathetic description, penned the story beautifully, congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Savita Tyagi 10 April 2020

A heart wrenching story, beautifully said. Its sadness touches at the core of the heart. Congratulations.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2020

Beautiful poem with sad ending. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 April 2020

A very sad end to a beautiful poem. Very nicely worded to make it enjoyable reading. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 April 2020

Extremely well composed sir! Many congratulations for this fabulous piece of poetry being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 10 April 2020

Congratulations as this poem is being selected as the poem of the day..

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2020

Tearful Moments! ! ! ! Muse of the vice infecting his golden girls. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Basic character of such category of women though subside for the time being will wake up with strong desire in favourable situations. It's a psychological fact. The anticlimax of the story could have a slightly different turn. However congratulations being POD

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Kevin Patrick 10 April 2020

Im not sure how I feel about this work, its all to horrifying to prospect, unless ones life is threatened, I don't see the need to take a life, oh we all have motives and the lash of anger can make us do things, and from the perspective of the man his murder was righteous in his own mind, yet the consequences are dire. He tried to save his daughters but he only damned himself. Thought provoking work.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2013

So sad....No one has any right to murder another.Beautiful poem and well written. Thank you Sir, for the valuable for my poems....thanks a lot.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 March 2012

Rajendran Muthiah, Is ti a real story? No one has any right to murder another human. The disparity between the poor and the rich has been widened in India and the moral values diminished due to various reasons! !

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Rajendran Muthiah

Rajendran Muthiah

Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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