A Desire Comments

Very expressive and an engaging write. Thanks for sharing.

Where neither one makes victim the other, Nor playfully breaks the brittle hearts, Nor does cast fear holding the fatal guns Verily, nicely envisioned, a lovely poem that should realize.......10

There is a word Mun/Man i dont find proper replacement of this word in english. It is more faster than light. we may flap its wing and reach to our destination.

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Words pouring out from the soul, a truncated part of the soul clamouring to unite with the One and the only ONE that knows no boundaries, no color or creed, that has spreadout itself into the stars, the Sun, the Moon, the beauteous mountains, oceans, landscapes, sweet waters of the rivers, colorful blooming flowers and forests and the beautiful fauna. Your poem transported me to the eternity and infinity for a while but then the body drags me back. Hey Shanazar, this one poem alone is sufficient to make you immortal as a poet. Allah has sent you to sing songs of eternity. Don't give up. CP

wow! ! this is really nice........well done

This is one of the most beautiful writings I have read. The title is DESIRE. The title is not worthy of this masterpiece. You must find a title more worthy. A man desires things which are within his reach. You have descrbed something only Heaven may provide. GW62

desires to be desired are always nagging the minds uncontrolled........