A Desire To Reach Each Other Comments

Both have a distinct desire To reach each other; But I know that I am destined to Fail in my race, While my child is destined To win the race! “O, there is joy in being young! ”— I say to myself. “O, there is limitless freedom in being old! ” My child proclaims! - - - - - - -A very nice portrayal of thoughts of a child as well as of an old portion with much wisdom.

Excellent insight! The dialogue you use makes this all the more close to home. We are the elders in time, but the inner child keeps us young. Forever this will be.xxxElys

Yes, the children of today want to grow up so fast, those of us who are grown know that there should be no rush, childhood is too short as it is. Thank you for sharing :)

What a profound write.... and isn't it true? So very true! HG: -) xx

Truly said. A nice poem.

The other side is always greener