A Desire To Excel Comments

Imagine indeed. This is a wonderful sentiment that evokes thoughts of the great John Lennon, who like you, wanted such a world. Nicely done.

A wishful poetic thinking coming out of the utter despair, the unabated terrorism around the world brings into your mind...well written piece...thanks a lot for your supporting voice and for your concern over what happened in Mumbai on 26th November, Deepen...10

A timely write...reminding we are just humans...the social animals...we cannot survive without each others help and love....still so many things differentiate us, so much divide exists between us! With deep condolences to the mumbai terror victims!

oh thats a great, that is the cult of HUMANISM and the whole world would serinades if that is reality happens to happen, great write,10++++, thanks for sharing

actually there is no need to imagine even nothing is there actually.a very good thought and wish- thanks for sharing

Desire to feel free, is the ultimatum.........anyone? ? ?

nice work....... i really like it......

Felt pain when was attacked Mumbai by culprit spirit! Sorrowful is, religions are not responsible for hostility! The people, who using religion for their socio- political interests, they are doing inhumane things. If religions erase out from society yet hatred hostility would not stop! In religio-history we see hostility bcoz of ‘causes’ and ‘effects’. Sometime ‘causes’ stay behind the screen but ‘effects’ flashes. We hav been living in trouble since beginning so far. It is our wisdom to find out peaceful solutions. 10+ for yaur peace love.

For centuries populace has been aspiring for this to happen; Call it Ramarajya or Thomas More's utopia. Is it possible? let us hope. Good poem......10

Imagination is the seed that sprouts and spreads into a forest. A very well penned poem with a mission. You think like me. Build up your poetry on this base. God bless you. CP

as dreamy as it sounds It's very sad Knowing that we are entering the (Modern Hell) ..and with Arrogance to every meaning of Humanity

if only if only.........your prayers should be heard...................

Deependra's thoughts are not Utopia as humanity has to rethink in the manner his poem feels, as present world is fast receding into a 'Modern Dark Age'.