Friday, September 4, 2009

A Desire Endless! Comments

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Desire is endless for many guys in this world;
If one wish is fulfilled another one crops up!
To fulfil all desires many long to live long…
Will there be an end for desire in the world?
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Ramesh T A
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Ramesh T A 04 September 2009

Thanks to Tamara Jay Hanaring for her comment: 'well penned ramesh..agree with you..true thoughts'

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Ian Bowen 04 September 2009

Ramesh, well penned. Competition abounds, where second best is no longer worth talking about. Great idea for a poem, and as you say you can not take you winnings with you.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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