A Desire Comments

Love is not a game or any war- lovely lines my friend!

very wel writen. i loved to read it. Great job

i really liked this poem a lot...

I like the title. It is simple and to the point and the poem represents the title perfectly. Now, about the poem. The ending is the weakest part. It leaves the reader with nothing to remember. The opening was only fair, but this poem is much beter than the first one I read. There are some good phrases scattered through the poem. The word usage is again the weakness overall in the writing. I am sure that will improve with time. The ending really needs to be changed. ---- Greenwolfe 1962

‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’ Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman… Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed… In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul… Thanks Uncle Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK