Monday, August 3, 2009

A Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

in hours of darkness,
your thoughts shined,
like bright stars, illumining,
my very being.
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ritty patnaik
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Indira Babbellapati 16 August 2009

several layers concealed behind this veil of desire...

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Mamta Agarwal 16 August 2009

Like glowwaorm heads for candle... final union with the supreme- attaining salvation your style is simple and effective. you convey profound insights in a few short lines Mamta

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Surya . 15 August 2009

really interesting write. nice composition.thanx for sharing.voted10 surya

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 August 2009

ohh yes, this poem actually describes the process of rebirth. desire...springs, from ego-the root of existence. and until and unless its all absorb in the infinity...u will be reborn. the desire for deliverance, is a desire too! yes, loved the poem...totally. thank you.

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Saadat Tahir 03 August 2009

even shorn of the religious fervor...the poem is beautiful on a philosophical level... i enjoyed reading it its so easy and fluid great penning cheers

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Raj Nandy 03 August 2009

In the last para you have artistically and poetically highlighted the Hindu concept of re-birth! This same concept had once made me to write, - ' Erring on The Positive Side'! I always pray for 'Moksha' till the very end! A deserving ten! -Raj Nandy

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