A Desire Comments
in hours of darkness,
your thoughts shined,
like bright stars, illumining,
my very being.
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Like glowwaorm heads for candle... final union with the supreme- attaining salvation your style is simple and effective. you convey profound insights in a few short lines Mamta
really interesting write. nice composition.thanx for sharing.voted10 surya
ohh yes, this poem actually describes the process of rebirth. desire...springs, from ego-the root of existence. and until and unless its all absorb in the infinity...u will be reborn. the desire for deliverance, is a desire too! yes, loved the poem...totally. thank you.
even shorn of the religious fervor...the poem is beautiful on a philosophical level... i enjoyed reading it its so easy and fluid great penning cheers
In the last para you have artistically and poetically highlighted the Hindu concept of re-birth! This same concept had once made me to write, - ' Erring on The Positive Side'! I always pray for 'Moksha' till the very end! A deserving ten! -Raj Nandy
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7/24/2025 5:42:33 AM # 1.0.0
several layers concealed behind this veil of desire...