Monday, March 15, 2021

A Desire. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is burning in your desire,
And the fire is seeping blood from cold veins,
As the eyes ignites the light,
A wild dust storm swirls around,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 20 March 2021

Desires are sparks that keep driving us.

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Poetic Sky 20 March 2021

What a wonderful poem Asim

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Shreya Hacks 17 March 2021

No end to human desires. They are always fascinating.

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Deepak S S 17 March 2021

Desirable desire. Liked it MAN.

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Varsha M 15 March 2021

So beautifully woven nicely penned emotional poem sir. Indeed true love deserves this for it's requesting its better half for its share. Magnificent write. I'm truly carried by its emotional touch.

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me poet yeps poet 15 March 2021

DESIRE CAN NEVER BE QUENCHED SHOW ME A SINGLE MAN R WOMAN I WILL BOW MAN

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Aarzoo Mehek 15 March 2021

Desire fans the senses to fullfil the journey of love. Such a beautiful piece of poetry.5+++++++

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Kostas Lagos 15 March 2021

'a pilgrimage to the Loveland'...Nice touch!

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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