Thursday, November 1, 2007

A Desertion Welcomed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Please desert me disappointing feelings,
You churn out misery.
It twists my heart under my torso,
Like thorns pricking my skin,
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Kristy Artmann
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Kristy, You really make your verse come alive with your emotions. The image of twisting your heart under your torso is a vivid one.

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McComb, MS
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