A Deserted Island Comments
A lovely paradise - she once was.
With birds chirping all around,
Dolphins and whales singing for their mates.
Not even one storm that passed wrecked her;
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You showed an excellent and loveliest poem in your poetic words about a deserted island. The emotions meant are visible here and as we read your brilliant poem, we can touch that too. Are you comparing a deserted island with the human state? Or the many occurrences and changes in the universe? The pains and sufferings so well portrayed.
Thank you for your kind words. I tried to present a lonely woman as a deserted island. And yes Ms. Chan, you got me! ! I have compared the varied emotions a woman with the strange undercurrents of the island. Both are redeemed by Mother Nature, hence no man is an island.
Feelings are lyrical by nature, and you express them in your poem. When I write mine, I prefer to stay more close to reality and keep a watch on the connection with me. For instance, I would write as the first part: A lovely paradise, she was her words colourful birds chirping, her motions dancing around me as a dolphin mate and so on, combining human love with the Great Divine Mother
Dolphins and whales singing for their mates. To cure all those daunting nights heaves of lustful wind Plead the heavenly pour to wipe away all her torments She wailed in loneliness for one last time. in Her arms, holds She all that deserted. dear poetess. i have just collected verses from your beautiful poem. of woes, sufferings, lustful nights and pain.. memories that linger.. very nice poem. write, write. tony
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7/19/2025 9:41:39 AM # 1.0.0
indeed a great poetic piece! it has beautifully captured a lonely heart