Saturday, August 2, 2008

A Demon's Touch Comments

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There was one point in my life
when I was doing nothing but bad
the worst thing that came out of it
were the experiences that I had.
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bobby kramer jr.
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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

That must have been so scary. Thank God he is always there for us. Lovely poem.

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Viola Grey 03 August 2008

losing control of your body and giving it over to demons must truely be a nightmare...I like the positivity of the sun in the last line...I had to read your biography and now see such a deeper meaning to this piece...good luck.

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RyuOh Kenshin 02 August 2008

I like this poem. Great description, it plant a visual in my head. It was like reading a short story. Great Job ^_^

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