Wednesday, June 27, 2018

A Delighting Decision (A Poem, Being Inspired By A Post Of Marie Shine) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lengthening shadows are writing a poem on love,
for the whole sunny day we walked together,
now it's an evening of courtship and romance.
Moon and the stars are choosing their best dresses,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2018

A great poem of love brilliantly penned The closure lines are very moving.10+++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 June 2018

excellent lines of two souls in one LOVE- we shall be too close like color and fragrance of a rose, and we shall dance. I am sure and you should also be sure, for all pains of life, forever, for each other, we are and we shall remain a cure. great wow

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Red Soul 28 June 2018

Love can cure many pains of our lives. A brilliant, beautiful poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 June 2018

A beautiful decision of two lovers, inr the lengthening shadow of life. A poem so nicely penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 June 2018

THE LENGTHENING SHADOWS SHINE THE ONLY POET WE ALL UNIVERSALLY ADORE IS PH LISTENING

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Robert Murray Smith 27 June 2018

This poet has the dressed the poem in words that Shine.+++++10

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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