A Delicate Rainy Morning Comments

Cloud is an angel who touches us with raindrops. The rainy day imagery is beautifully drawn in this poem. This is an excellent sharing done here.

I love this especially the line towards the bottom in rainy morning hopeless awakes

A beautiful piece. So soothing and delicate. Loved the title as well.

A stunning poem worthy of the attention recieved from so many comments and favorites.I love the sense of delicacy and lightness of being that prevails in this beautiful write. Thank you dear poetess for this lovely poem.

the delicate fine way of describing the deep feelings of the heart comparing with the rainy morning........ lovely art.. thank you dear poetess

Marieta maIngleas, Hello, I am new to your writing. this was a delight. Inner freshness of thought regarding the devoted purity of affection for another. With angelic presence. Brush of his wing but he would not tell me. Hope just speaks out in this lovely poem. Thankyou for writing blessings, Kathy

Oh Wow! ! ! Incredibly Beautiful write! ! ! Just Flows, In Heart, and In Mind! ! ! Loved It! ! ! !

The angel had his own way of telling me about the poet's muse but the man had his own limitations. Very well explained. Thanks. but I've been waiting for you, to give me your love

I love rain either from sky or from your eye

give me your love and stay in peace..

As lovely and delicate as a rainy morning this poem takes the heart away. Simply beautiful! Loved it. Wonderful to read it as member poem of the day.

Very nice. Falling in love with rain gives immense pleasure.

Very touching and well written.

Calling this a Blues Poem is very appropriate. At a concert many years ago the Blues singer Taj Mahal told us the Blues can be many things but they ALWAYS have to be s-w-e-e-t, and your poem is suffused with sweetness peeking through the sadness of a lost opportunity for love/affection/sharing. I noticed you used the helping verb WOULD five times in 13 lines - that verb precisely expresses the sadness of lost opportunity. But the movement of this poem has a compelling counter-rhythm expressed in the sheer loveliness of the DELICATE RAINY MORNING. Do you know Shakespeare's line MERCY DROPPETH AS THE GENTLE RAIN FROM HEAVEN TO THE PLACE BELOW? That's the counter-rhythm which saves the poem from abject sadness so the sweet blues can work their magic and salvage some happiness in the promise of love in the future. This rainfall is shining!

Beautiful sister, just beautiful. A feeling of tranquility came over me as I read this gem of a poem...thank you for the treat.....

rains come with their baggage...

Just listen to the voice of the rain...the angel will bring you your wish ...not hopeless...Like your mood...your poem. Thanks for sharing.

For me not so easy to understand 4 lines…’waiting’ and ‘hopeless awakes’ …needs contemplation But rest part of poetry is a flowething emotion and excellent… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

I wish i could have such a lovely morning.....so sensually you described! ! ! Beautiful poem.

Great expectations not at all belied.. Hopes washed in the glow of the bright raindrops...Angelic effulgence of poetry..felt by the readers