A defeated soul is the most humble creation
As it knows the truth & it's own limitations
A defeated soul knows life's pitfalls
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Life is an ice cream, melting in it's cone! Superb conceptualization. Thanks for sharing this inspirational poem which is motivational too.10 points.
A defeated soul has seen the rise & the fall Hence its friendly & is as strong as a stone wall Thanks for the lovely poem so beautifully written. 10 for It. Subhas
You poured your soul into this poem, Ameya. Thank you for sharing