Sunday, July 31, 2016

A Defeated Soul Comments

Rating: 4.7

A defeated soul is the most humble creation
As it knows the truth & it's own limitations

A defeated soul knows life's pitfalls
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ameya deshpande
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Kelly Kurt 01 August 2016

You poured your soul into this poem, Ameya. Thank you for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 July 2016

Life is an ice cream, melting in it's cone! Superb conceptualization. Thanks for sharing this inspirational poem which is motivational too.10 points.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 31 July 2016

A defeated soul has seen the rise & the fall Hence its friendly & is as strong as a stone wall Thanks for the lovely poem so beautifully written. 10 for It. Subhas

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Deejay Jaffar 31 July 2016

Very nice poem. Thak you for sharing this

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