A Deeper Shade Of Black Comments
The shadows play hide and seek
Dreams are too timid
Sandman shows no clemency
Sleep is a captive princess in the stone castle
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strong emotions spilling out all through...the way you compose your poems is immaculate, Jathin...you dress your words nicely irrespective of their shades...black or not...deeper or not...thanks...10
Ah, this is quite deep, as said before, and I enjoyed the use of vocabualry, as well as the descriptions, they were very vivid. Well done.
A very good write Jathin, deep and thought provoking, 10 Lynda xx
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7/19/2025 4:23:52 AM # 1.0.0
Good narration with some nice turns of phrase. May I invite u to take a look at my poems pls?