A Deep Pain. Comments

Touching...

What else is the life, just a search. Heart heavy and ailing, searching for a place to place my burden too heavy to carry in my frail body. Searching...... Searching.......and Searching!

Deep insight is well observed with expressive emotion really. Amazingly drafted and shared.

A very insightful poem, Jaishree. I enjoyed. Peace

So true.. people are like chameleon, we don't know when they are going to change their colours... and for that the searching goes on... for the right person or right place where we can find peace of mind and put our burden down. wonderful creation. thank you.

Awesome poem, I enjoyed the flow and words.10