Monday, November 27, 2017

A Deed, A Price Comments

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Rob Knetsch
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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2017

FIRST PART: This poem reminds me about a law in nature, one has to pay for the guilt that person hand done. A severe law, I reckon, since I am one who believes in Jesus Christ and thus is my motto; Your being Guilty, I must be able to FORGIVE and never to let pay. Here I only wants to show that I do not deal in letting the other pay back when

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2017

LAST PART: I am harmed, but to forgive needs quite a long period of time. I have enjoyed this honest poem, thank you for sharing. I can forgive, I have learned that, but I am not saying that I am a saint or some holy figure, none at all. Just as human as you with many sins according to God´s Law. A 10 Vote for this ardent poem.

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