Monday, January 28, 2008

A Decrepit Map Comments

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Callused skin on my body
Ruptured by the cruel nature
Like a deserted and dry riverbed
In a summer
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Pushpa Ratna Tuladhar
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Michael Sweetbird 29 January 2008

Excellent poem Pushpa.. but your poems and others are getting lost in the deluge of poems you and some others are submitting. It's better to submit one poem per day, that way it will probably be read instead of being hidden among the hundreds.

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