Friday, July 10, 2009

A Deceptive Flower Comments

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She's truely blossomed,
Into a beautiful flower.
The fire in her eyes,
Is meant to devour.
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Luna Moon
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Angel OfGod 06 December 2009

This sounds slightly similar to My Succubus maybe not as dark but certainly as most of the woman in my life. Nice write.

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Peri Morgan 10 July 2009

Love it. Reminds me of someone I know who does actually dazzle you with her beauty then rips out your heart. Well done.

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