# A Deceiver Comments

awesome Haiku/ senryu.. great write.

Very well written Samanyan....10+++

Sometimes men forget about the true essence of living life under God when deceived by the power of money. Very meaningful and wonderful write, Sam! : -)

very true, nicely presented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Finally its money the immediate visible aid that catches man's fancy....its almost become his second nature! ! ! ! ! ! ! a good thought there, a good write! ! ! !

Good poem, well expressed thoughts, well told as always 10 Lynda xx

A profound poem. Very well penned. CP

Very true.......The deceiving nature of mankind is indeed very injurious to the Nature who has bestowed upon us so many things but we fail to recongize that due the pelts of greediness we have...... Regards Naseer

they say money is the root of all evil. good example 'jude' betraying christ for money.

A well written poem with wisdom.

'All in one and one in all' is the projection of the divine force on the Universe.

excellent writing and insightful

Excellent write. I love the 2nd stanza most.

Not wrong to have a penny, but if you worship it, then - - - - - - -

very well written.. ignoring the gifts of God.. man counts his penny.. wonderful...

i like this.its well thought of and out of the box.good work.10

forgetting is acts of man...willed the danger of self determination and lies the beginning of losing the spiritual umbilical cord of God form our human aspiration....a poem that lighted the reader to forget not the giver of life.....a wonderful poem... a 10+

nice sequence of haikus..great write...10

An interesting collection of haikus formed into a poem..10

beautiful write...may be i do understand what you mean, yes in many faces they are, deceivers..wait while watch Samanyan...10+++++soon the invaders will reach the castle but the brave army are ready....