Saturday, November 5, 2005

A Debt Repaid Years Later Comments

Rating: 4.6

I dragged myself to the train station
and when I arrived
I was surprised to see
five police cars blocking Sheepshead Bay Road,
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Charles Chaim Wax
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R H 17 March 2006

Pacy and gritty, an enjoyable read. Kind regards, justine.

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Otradom Pelogo 11 January 2006

Hi Charles, Enjoyed the juant from one end to the other, and exciting also. Read a couple of others on the way out, trying to go to the gym and get back into the groove of things, and was glad for a mind opening adventure. Thanks.

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Mary Nagy 10 January 2006

You have a wonderful way of putting us there with you Charles. This was stressful, exciting, funny, and heartwarming all at the same time. Great poem. Sincerely, mary

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Lucy Burrow 10 November 2005

Wow, that really had me gripped! an intriguing story with a great twist. I liked it. Regards, Lucy

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Simon Whild 05 November 2005

A compelling narrative. An amusing social satire that paints the scene with economic brush-strokes of colour with a good narrative push. I like the subtle rhymes and the wonderful twist at the end. A good slice of life.

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