I dragged myself to the train station
and when I arrived
I was surprised to see
five police cars blocking Sheepshead Bay Road,
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Hi Charles, Enjoyed the juant from one end to the other, and exciting also. Read a couple of others on the way out, trying to go to the gym and get back into the groove of things, and was glad for a mind opening adventure. Thanks.
You have a wonderful way of putting us there with you Charles. This was stressful, exciting, funny, and heartwarming all at the same time. Great poem. Sincerely, mary
Wow, that really had me gripped! an intriguing story with a great twist. I liked it. Regards, Lucy
A compelling narrative. An amusing social satire that paints the scene with economic brush-strokes of colour with a good narrative push. I like the subtle rhymes and the wonderful twist at the end. A good slice of life.
Pacy and gritty, an enjoyable read. Kind regards, justine.