A Death Story Comments

Asma, your poem is very touchy and full of deep feelings. True to say, I got emotional reading your poem. A poem demands control of passion in language.

I like it so much. Your words come from the core of your heart. Thank you so much.

Very touchy, soft and green poem. I can feel your heart through this poem. It's the success of a poem surely.

I saw what you couldn't say I felt your hidden pain You smiled looking at my eyes, Light of my nights I stand where your coffin lay, a great love story Written in clear words. your simplicity helps me to read and enjoy the emotions in your words. Thank you very much. tony