A Death From Within. Comments

That was beautifully constructed poem :) I wrote something similar in my poem stillborn. Preets

Vincent- I am an OB/GYN nurse and I know what you are going through, at least from the parent's perspective, we see it all the time, and it is totally devestating. My heart goes out to you. Beautiful, sad, tender poem. It helps to put it down on 'paper'. Linda

God Vincent, I am so sorry but what a lovely writing...regards......willow

I seriously am crushing on this poem its wonderful

I think it is beautifull. Infact very beautyfull.

Sometimes those who have left us are never truly gone from memory. Now, your sweet treasure is forever immortalized in verse. Very touching. If I might make a suggestion. I would change the line 'Where once three hearts beated...' to 'Where once three heart did beat..' in order to keep the flow of the poem going. Truly very touching. Warmest regards, Joy

some memories are meant to stay with us forever...good work...regards linda