A Death Fanatic Comments

You write quite intelligently.. The imagery is cold and very well developed. The way you describe your thoughts on paper is quite impressive. However, as one of your readers I would suggest you to try different styles.. Most of your poems almost follow the same theme.. Considering your talent for writing, I believe you should step out of your skin sometimes and try experimenting with your style.. You'll produce wonders. Well, its just a suggestion. :) Good work, Vittal.

beautiful description...! ! ! ! ......really nice..keep writing

Clever Writing from the depths of your soul. Ask your guide to bring you into the light. You need to bring your youth to shield you from exposure by the Darker Forces on you shoulders, I would still award you a solid 10 my clever Friend.

Wow...Nice poem wonderful imagery formed on my head while reading it... It was phropetic like... I just notice of the word 'skys' on the first stanza I think you mean is 'skies'. Hence, the poem was brilliant so 10/10!