Wednesday, June 27, 2012

A Death Exit From Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I lay there, blood dripping out my wrist
I'm so weak can't move my fingers to make a fist
I feel so peaceful, I feel so calm
I like the warm feeling of blood striding against my palm
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Carolina Soto
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Drawn(no pun intended) to the title of your work, here...as I have written quite a few works including short stories on the Darkside and I still enjoy a good read...Your piece is punched with graphic imagescape, and it's good to know that the above work does NOTpour from an auto-bio vein(again...no pun intended...well, perhaps a drops worth) ? Solid write ~FjR~

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