A Death Blow Is A Life Blow To Some Comments
a death blow is a life blow to many
whose world is a caged dream
a bird crying to do what other birds do
eating, mating, flying to the ends of the world
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i really do not get this it sound great but i can not picture it as i only picture it to understand it.i find some words and sentence really good.i read a few and they are good and you are a great poet don't fell upset by what i said if you are i am sorry. kelly
Great stuff! I like how you've crafted this poem into being totally yours. I think it ends very well, 'a death blow is a life blow to others in the same mould'. Well done. All the best, Seán
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8/6/2025 5:57:08 AM # 1.0.0
'a death blow is a life blow to...'great poem.a great blow to poetry! ! it's just FANTASTIC! ! !