A Death And A Transformation Comments

It is a great write in sympathy of all hapless victims of female foeticide and infanticide. So touching and impressive. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

A soul stirring poem on female foeticide and infanticide....we all should voice loud our opposition....you have done it so touchingly and thought provokingly Valsa...great work

Seed of love and life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A deep and thoughtful poem and becomes very impressive when turn our thinking towards female foeticide and infanticide.

A truly beautiful poem. Well put. Bien!

A very well read poem for a good cause.......Valsa.......very exceptionally well crafted.............I am touched......

Hi Valsa, Rachel Nichols advised that I check out your poetry. I've just finished reading a dozen or so, To me, it's clear that you have the gift. I really liked the humming bird one, and this one too since it leaves one with the feeling that you've grasped the truth of the eternalness of Soul, hence embrace the concept of reincarnation thus the transformation. Loved it. If so moved check out some of my poems - they too embrace spiritual concepts which I hold as truths. One poem, The Lonesome Road might be a good starting point. I've added you to my favorite poets list. Cheers!

for centuries I waited to be born this gives me the impression w can be born when ever we please. maybe so something to think about. I like the thought

you have penned your poem for the very noble cause...poem has deep message & abusive reality..well written, deserve 10

change of mind in society is most essential to stop the murder of a society/ Crime unto the half world the female world is more than any other crime, Why discrimination Why? why? with the abundance of poets few writes. I thanks for this you penned for the cause, the cause for the generations yet to come/thank you with a request please do write

Female foeticide has to subside in due course of time... We are for now, as you say, more concerned about a society that does not care for the survivors... A grim picture indeed. Let there be a change of miraculous order soon or later

A good and fitting tribute Valsa 10/10

a v nice poem...sad that these instances r on the rise, where females themselves dont understand females, n above all there r cruel men too around to molest the surviving females, instilling fear in the minds of common ppl....a gud write Valsa Mam!

with reference to the poet's notes, this is a broad-canvas poem...rich for its depth and timeless span... here the abstractions of life and death exchange their meanings...a great diagnostic hand Valsa ji! ! !

A lovely imagination unfolds in sympathy of victims of female foeticide and infanticide.Agood write - as ever, VALSA