A Deal In Helplessness Comments

 From: Speedy Hartman (Pasadena / texas United States; Male; 60)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 6/23/2011 4: 55: 00 AM (GMT-6: 00)  Subject: A Deal In Helplessness I loved it, it had great imagery and sexual overtones without being explicit.. and loved the ending, what people won't do for love..

This Another Brilliant Poem, I Give It! 0 Because Its Holds Multiple Truths In The Story It Potreys

Juan Olivarez (Alton TexasUnited States; Male; 58)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 3/2/2011 7: 30: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)  Subject: Re: Re: Re: Re: Shooting Of A Porn Scene The poem is sexual in nature but there are no vulgar words and no distasteful moments. Moreover the message it conveys is important. That women will do anything for their children. I think it is anexcellent poem. Whether you publish it or not is yourdecision. But it has to be your decision and yours alone. Moreover nobody should dictate to you what you are to publish. After all, if they do not like it they donot have to read it. sincerely Juan

Buxton Shippy (WinchendonUnited States; Male; 56)  To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir  Date Time: 6/4/2011 3: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)  Subject: A Deal In Helplessness 'A Deal In Helplessness' articulates the depth and complexity of a mother's love for her desperately ill son and the length to which she will go to help him. The author delicately describes a pornographic act without being graphic. Authentic imagery. I rate it 10 out of 10. Buxton

I weep because many mothers, due to poverty, had done and still do the same thing to fend for their children especially in countries that have been bled white by their leaders that live in affluence.I believe that through writing, to point out such evils, we shall make the world a better place for all.Well done.

dear I got simply speechless really...how all that got graduated...poignant...creates a complete visual perception...plz read my poem PLAY AND WIN, AND EQUATION and leave comments plz

Many a deal is done in helplessness as seen in your poem. Is what she did right or wrong? We are none to judge her! You have very well brought out the helplessnes of the woman in question here. It's a 10 from, Mohammed.