Peaple used to say I'd become a nobody.
They said I'd end up goin' to jail or diggin'
holes for stiff and cold bodies but I ignored 'em
if I keep goin' like a rain thats pourin' I might make it.
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You write well - I enjoyed this: honest and straight forward and to the point - three of the essentials of good poetry. Keep on writing! Please take a look at my new pooems. I would love to hear from you.
This poem is magnificent, The words you used, make the poem emotional and deep, its amazing! :)
It's a wonderful poem....(headache like earthquake) .....some lines show a strong attitude...excellent! ! ! ! !
Really good poem. Like it a lot. May i invite you to read my poem Called, justice part 2.
not only deaf, but blind and mute also. a great poem. we are survived with the hope of truth only