Sunday, June 29, 2003

A Deaf-Mute Comments

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A deaf-mute brings a cup of tea!
A cup of tea with love so rare;
Love uncommonly seen, I stare;
How do I thank her for her charity?
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Dr John Celes
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Paul Latham 30 January 2008

very insightful, I had never thought of god in that way before. Thanks for sharing.

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Very compassionate, it brings to the surface a lot of emotions. I also enjoyed the style of this piece. L&T

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Adeline Foster 29 August 2007

A beautiful poem, so full of compassion. Thank you for your comments on my sonnet. Yes I do know about that line and yet every time I start to write the ‘For’ on the beginning, I read it and say, “Ah, leave it, I like it so much better without.” So I guess I’ll just have to field the comments. Glad you liked it, hope you read more. Adeline

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Raul Castelan 23 June 2007

Beautiful poem that you devised here, and stunning too. If we could only give onto others what they don't have. That would just be a wonderful thing to do. EXCELLENT! ! !

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