Monday, July 9, 2012

A Deaf Adder Comments

Rating: 4.9

You are controlled by the beat and bridle,
And you are dark and slippery!
However, praise is comely for the upright.
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Jacob Wentz 19 June 2025

I did not expect a he-goat

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2020

Love and life! ! Love and art! Journey of peace. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always in your land.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2020

My soul thirsts for your love! And my mind will not rest until i find you my love; But, praise is comely for the upright.........an impressive inscription on deep love. Beautiful poem with thrilling expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2018

Righteous Morals! ! Facing the works of the truth. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2017

A great piece of poetry Your journey from the bottom of hill is very commendable

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Obigod Chidi Cece 03 September 2017

Sir, you are a genius.

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Elena Sandu 19 July 2017

What else could the heart of a poet do but keep its rivers of love flowing? Happy to see this wonderful penning chosen as the poem of the day, Congratulations dear friend!

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Christina Simmons 19 July 2017

A very descriptive and imaginary poem. I enjoyed reading your words. And it made me feel of the love I can get from another. But in order to appreciate what he has to offer me I MUST FIRSTLY LOVE MYSELF.

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Edward, this is one of your best poems. I am happy that i could read it. Dance for joy when you have hope! For, we will surely fly away one day with, The wings of the love. Love and hope are essentials of life that make life worthy and joyful. I loved two expressions of your poem - wings of love and hills of love.Both very beautiful and inspiring. Hearty Congratulations dear Edward. Stay blessed always. 100+++

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Richard Wlodarski 19 July 2017

Excellent write! Very well deserved Poem Of The Day! Congratulations, Edward!

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Norah Tunney 19 July 2017

But this journey of mine starts from the hills of love. And to fly away with the wings of love conjures up all sorts of beautiful images Great lines Not familiar with references but I love the sentiments Edmund

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Lyn Paul 19 July 2017

Beautiful to read these romantic words. loved it!

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Anzelyne Shideshe 19 July 2017

Great poem you earned congrats Edward

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Muzahidul Reza 19 July 2017

Congrats, being day's poem, From the land of the living to satisfy my muse; thank you for sharing the poem with us

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 July 2017

we will surely fly away one day, with the wings of love Heartiest Congratulations for inking such a wonderful inspirational poem as also on it's poem of the Day. Regards.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2017

Mankind! ! Let face the truth and live in peace with each other.

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Seamus O Brian 19 July 2017

Certainly moves with the Mashriq lyricism of biblical poetry, enhanced by the dynamic and colorful metaphors of nature. A vivid piece of romantic writing, Edward. Congratulations on POD. S

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Lantz Pierre 19 July 2017

How, with all the turmoil and attention that this region begets have I never before heard the term Mashriq? Brilliant. I love learning new words. Thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 19 July 2017

I do not know much about bible images but comments helped me understand it. Once understood it's a pleasure to read this beautiful poem of love and devotion. Congratulations for the member poem place Edward Cofi Louis.

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Rajnish Manga 19 July 2017

I have enjoyed reading this poem but frankly, I am not very conversant with biblical references. Congratulation on being selected as the Poet of the Day. Thanks. And my mind will not rest until i find you my love; this journey of mine starts from the hills of love.

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Bharati Nayak 19 July 2017

Congratulations Edward Kofi Louis for selection of your poem as the Poem of the Day! !

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