Monday, September 22, 2014

A Deadly Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

The caravan of life never stops,
A harvest is followed by new grown crops,
Cold nights are followed by hot sunny days,
When paths are enlighten by golden rays,
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Khalid Saifullah 07 November 2017

Agreat sentimental poem.....................................................

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Chinedu Dike 03 December 2014

Awesome! A lovely sonorous rhyme pattern. The articulation, the insight, the penning, are all exquisite. A beautiful poem from a master poet. Thanks for sharing.

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Sarmad Mirza 25 September 2014

Must Say Very Inspiring poem it is: -)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 September 2014

A poep stood as hope and giving a sermon to forget..nothing will last except virtue, everything will be dead except humanity it also say about human volcanic anger ...a beautiful array, rhymed and clearly served the purpose thank you

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Valsa George 23 September 2014

This, I think is one of the most powerful poems you have ever written! How through ages, you have charted the course of man's rise and fall! Hills will be levelled and hollows will be filled! The exploited will turn to be the exploiters, for man will learn to retalliate one day and none can block the fast changes coming in and none can rewrite the writings on the wall! I got swept away by the might of this whirl wind! Sure you deserve top marks!

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Salini Nair 23 September 2014

very inspiring like it.................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 September 2014

An impressive and truthful picture of our society particularly the rural society, situation is now ripe enough for a revolution.

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