Friday, March 25, 2011

A Deadly Dream Comments

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A little while ago I was among them
Smiling, talking and calling the life pleasure,
I remember a twinge of pain in my chest
And then it was dark all around,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Sherine El Geziry 15 June 2011

Perfect reminder of how our lives are fragile and how close the end is, though we usually tend to forget this fact..

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Mohammad Muzzammil 25 March 2011

Wow! Great poem. You've presented very nice poem in lovely words to describe a dream that has been broken.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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