A Dead Man Comments

It's a touching one.... Humanity dies everywhere nowadays... Emotional and poignant poem

Though the words are very emotional and deep and well chosen, the most regretful ones are 'unfinished but abandoned'.This is the case '(un) fortunately'. We'll all die and be forgotten, even though something remains in other's heart or memory, it comes the time to forget and to be forgotten... That is the human nature. Very touching indeed

Wow, It's like your heart talked and your hands just listened; then walked gently stride for stride where ever your heart roamed. Personal poems can do that and you did a great job. This might be my favorite poem from you.

He came home a different man He has become a scattered soul And yet he's still walking tall it was completely a different experience. i felt the ancient beliefs.It has a deep mourn not of death but the neglect of the human empathy and the emptiness of human bondage and love. it is also a sincere decry of how man is powerless and desperate before the might of fate and destiny. the elegy melts into warm and freezing passion. Man is the most pitiable because of his sense of logic and aggrandizement. Thanking you, please, go through my poem and kindly send me your feed back. P.Bose 6/11/10

So eloquent and so beautiful rose... A wonderful write dear. God bless you.

very moving. the emotions are captured very nicely with depth and intensity. i also feel the hard hitting impact of the honesty that rings behind your words. thanks for sharing!

I was very taken by the honesty of these well-chosen words. They moved me deeply and could well have been written about an uncle I loved who never made it back. Very touching indeed.

very nice call for a dear soul / it hard to feel abondoned / he may got fed up with ur pity for him / great effective feeling if it got to his hearing.

Such a deep and personal poem. I could but not feel your pain as I read your words. Beautifully written. Thank You for sharing.