between these two shores
i float like a dead leaf
am not dead either..
if i was i will not feel the pain
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Its so powerful a poem! Its such a thought provoking piece!
your images are always so vivid and powerful that one gets lost in the poem. this one has powerful message and drws a parallel with life. quite stimulating and thoughfully written....identity of a seed is the tree itself yet it cant show the seed..arent we all like a seed, a tree, a leaf at times...floating between the two shores and then ultimately going back to the soil from which we came....i liked this poem, only I feel in the 4th stanza, there is an extra S in the word SHOWS..shouldn't it be ' CAN A TREE SHOW ITS SEED....Pls see.
' I NEVER THOUGHT I WILL LOOSE MY IDENTITY AS A SEED CAN A TREE SHOWS ITS SEED EVEN IT WANTS TOO...' Very provoking piece. A very well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10++
A dead leaf we are floating in this eternal circle of life and our seeds carry on..thought provoking piece regards
A seed is the very foundation of a tree, but needs fresh soil and time to grow into a majestic tree (TREES AND LEAVES) A very well penned poem, keep it up! 10+++
In the scheme of creations, even a dead leaf can claim its importance, as seen from this nice poem.