A Dead Leaf Comments

Rolling here and there a leaf, Grey leaf on the road floating, A leaf severed from the branch,

A great philosophical poem on life. Beautifully crafted. 'Life is a dream like a bud dreaming to bloom, A dead leaf is flying having no choice, I am a leaf of an eternal tree, Detruncated from the branch.'.. is so beautiful to read. Thanks for sharing.

A dead leaf is flying having no choice, I am a leaf of an eternal tree, Detruncated from the branch...! !

Life is a dream like a bud dreaming to bloom, A dead leaf is flying having no choice, I am a leaf of an eternal tree, Detruncated from the branch...! ! !

Life is a dream like a bud dreaming to bloom, A dead leaf is flying having no choice, I am a leaf of an eternal tree, Detruncated from the branch.! ! !

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ........Byaan karna mushkil hai Bakhan karna khatam nahi hoti Jane mujhe kya ho gaya Bas teri muskaan he dikhta Chahe din ho ya raat Dhoop ho ya chaaoon Sab ek lagne laga hai Jabse aap se mulakat hua hai. Good attempt. Full of emotions

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Byaan karna mushkil hai Bakhan karna khatam nahi hoti Jane mujhe kya ho gaya Bas teri muskaan he dikhta .......Chahe din ho ya raat Dhoop ho ya chaaoon Sab ek lagne laga hai Jabse aap se mulakat hua hai. Good attempt. Full of emotions ur 483/500 how can u ever be a dead leaf see PPME is dying a dead one already he what DEADENED LEAF

7.I do not know if I am correct or not.just tried to express my feelings towards your poetry❤️

6.your poetry is expressing sadness, yet it is very much alive, it is vibrant with Truth.My dear friend, You are so truthful to life and poetry

5.Your poetry shows an unfamiliar fusion-blend of boredom and wisdom.You are wise enough to feel the dullness(of life) .And you are clever enough to live life without having any choice or question(we all are choiceless whether we know it or not.but often we are unaware of it)

4.I know not why you are so painful.May be it is for losing the colourful days of the past(as traced in some of your poems) , or it is the never ending monotony(that life offers us each moment) .

3.Your poem portrays life as a burden (that's why your poem attracts me sooo much) .There is pain, there is suffering in life...but it shows we must live it.

2.Now you are opening a new realm of poetry where there is more or less stability in society, no pain in body, no confusion in mind.yet there is suffering.. suffering for being alive

1.As we all know pain was there in modern literature.After two world wars we saw the emergence of hopelessness, melancholy, faithlessness, broken heart and fragmented self.There were social distress and psychological suffering...

I am a leaf of an eternal tree, Detruncated from the branch. Splendid poem!

Nicely composed poem. We all are leaves of tree that never dies though the leaf falls one by one and new grow in its place. Life is a dream like a bud dreaming to bloom....10+++