A Dead King Begging For Life Comments

Compelling and thoughtful piece, very well done

So many incredible lines in this write Kanav. So beautiful and too... be proud of your comments that have been shared by inspiring people.. Well done. Thank you

Kanav, your tale is alluringly beautiful and I am happy to see you here narrating a captivating story that has a purpose to serve. Literature of the kind is in fact in a state of being reinvented by enterprising poets like you.

Light will be identified only in darkness! Joy is relished only if there is sorrow! So the King's wish is not a foolish wish! A story beautifully narrated, illustrating a paradoxical concept! !

A beautifully written with an enchanting tale...loved reading it

Kanav Justa your poems have a flavor of parables with allegorical and mythical touch...as neela rightly pointed out the faculty of dramatising in your compositions with an obvious touch of conscious melody created by focus on meaningful alternate or sometimes occasional rhyming structure...a good work, indeed!

Kanav, I love the music of your poems.The dramatic representation of the theme of the poem has left a mesmerizing effect.

Truly you are a master storyteller, I love this thought provoking write, there has to be two sides to everything for us to be able to appreciate the opposite emotion! Brilliant write!

An interesting story and an interesting poem! Without the shadow of sorrow, joy itself makes an hurried exit. Loved the poem it with all my heart.