Wednesday, June 4, 2008

A Dead Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

*Heavy Sigh*
I don't even know why I even considered to try,
Don't even know why I would risk hurt again
To feel for a minute what I know to me is forbidden.
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Confusion Undastood
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 02 January 2010

Wonderful..your works are really good :)

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Fahim Sayed 04 June 2008

lot of feelings expressed....good write... Fahim

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Bonnie Collins 04 June 2008

Very bitter/sweetly penned with so many of those love/hate emotions that come when one realizes one loves and gives more than the other is capable of... Reader feels your complex emotion of wanting to move foward, yet not quite knowing how....Very good Bonnie

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