A Day You Will Hear My Song Comments

This is a lovely poem.Great read

......songs and lullabies of a cradle still echo in our minds, a beautiful write to bring them again to light....

Songs of a cradle somwhere dormant within us...but come to fore whenever we contemplate in solitude and become the source of a new stream of lyrics.....well penned as here..

a very beautiful poem....loved reading every line

Songs from your soul are always sweet Dinesh, keep on singing.

A new song is surging from my soul Let it surge and cover the entire space. Let it enable one to forget the murmurs inside. Beautiful poem expressing deep feelings. Thank you.

A new song is surging from my soul And it reverberates into the chambers of my dear ones. A day they will hear its rhymes I am sure. I often hear things can`t be that bad. We the members of PH enjoy the sweetness of your rhymes, not once but very often! If you have still better rhymes to sing for us.... we are all the more happy! Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard are sweeter, Dinesh! A lovely poem! !

Beautiful poem from your pen. Broken cradle though lost with the time, but the song of sweet memories will still ring our ears. No one can wash it away. Cradles songs were of love and care, that we still long for and may be long to have till our death. That bouquet para, I liked it very much...Those who love and value you, will definitely understand your love for them, as you know the love you give to them is like an oasis in heart of desert. This question can be taken in other way too. for anyone giving will feel like they have given their heart, but the receiving hand too should have the same feeling, unfortunately it may not happen. Expectations are more. These cradle songs can never be forgotten. Beautiful way you have penned it. I loved reading each lines....