A day without you
is like a day without air
I wake up gasping
knowing you're not there
...
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Wonderfully worded work. Loaded with a longing that is lovely and filled with love. Such a moving poem!
Thank you Howard the motivational poet Simon! Love the name you choose! Your comments keep me motivated to write more! :)
When a person feels the deepnes of love he or she can't live without beloved or lover. Beautifully penned.10
Thank you for your comment! Love that is like a deep river stops flowing without it's current.
Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Having someone to love and someone to love you always makes you feel enriched! I hope to remain enriched! Thank you for your ocmment, Chinedu
Thank you White Tiger for reading my poem and commenting! Have a nice day!
My heart is aching! ! Love and loss! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Love is always from the heart! Our mind sometimes tells us different, but I find the heart always wins! :) Thank you for your comment!
A poignant but beautiful poem. Heartfelt by the poetess and reader alike. +++10 Robert
Thank you, Robert! Love lost can certainly make you feel that way! Thanks for rating! :)
I wake up gasping knowing you're not there...love expressed in fine terms of loss.....and the yearning for the one loved.. fine poem. tony
When in love, there will always be a yearning! Thank you for reading and commenting!
I love this poem, simple and to the point for the greatest of LOVE...