Saturday, April 28, 2018

A Day Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day without you
is like a day without air
I wake up gasping
knowing you're not there
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Stephanie T Castillo 22 August 2020

I love this poem, simple and to the point for the greatest of LOVE...

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Wonderfully worded work. Loaded with a longing that is lovely and filled with love. Such a moving poem!

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

Thank you Howard the motivational poet Simon! Love the name you choose! Your comments keep me motivated to write more! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2018

When a person feels the deepnes of love he or she can't live without beloved or lover. Beautifully penned.10

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

Thank you for your comment! Love that is like a deep river stops flowing without it's current.

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Riza Braholli 17 June 2018

a beautyful poem and with lot of elegantly. thank you Aqua!

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2018

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Aqua Flower 31 May 2018

Having someone to love and someone to love you always makes you feel enriched! I hope to remain enriched! Thank you for your ocmment, Chinedu

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White Tiger 09 May 2018

I loved this poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 10 May 2018

Thank you White Tiger for reading my poem and commenting! Have a nice day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2018

My heart is aching! ! Love and loss! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 04 May 2018

A beatiful love poem, from the heart

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Aqua Flower 06 May 2018

Love is always from the heart! Our mind sometimes tells us different, but I find the heart always wins! :) Thank you for your comment!

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Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

A poignant but beautiful poem. Heartfelt by the poetess and reader alike. +++10 Robert

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Aqua Flower 29 April 2018

Thank you, Robert! Love lost can certainly make you feel that way! Thanks for rating! :)

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Rini Shibu 28 April 2018

pain of lose is well expressed in your line..well penned

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Aqua Flower 29 April 2018

Love is full of happiness and pain! I like it when it's happy! :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 April 2018

I wake up gasping knowing you're not there...love expressed in fine terms of loss.....and the yearning for the one loved.. fine poem. tony

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Aqua Flower 29 April 2018

When in love, there will always be a yearning! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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