Friday, July 17, 2009

A Day With Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday morning, when I was sitting on the couch
Eating chocolates and throwing away the pouch
I suddenly heard someone shouting
Oh My God! ! That is my mom flouting
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Dave Tanwar
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Ency Bearis 19 July 2009

a good poem...mother knows everything and can smell your secret...unique write..

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Ken E Hall 19 July 2009

A good tongue in cheek with mum poem left me tickled well done........regards

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Lynn Glover 18 July 2009

Dave: A good write about mother. Remember mother knows best. She very cleverly straightened you out that morning as mine has done to me in the past. Just keep on loving her. Good poem good rythem Lynn

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Kristina B; Williams 18 July 2009

gave you n a day with mother a 10+++

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Kristina B; Williams 18 July 2009

this is original in origin, had me smiling....good 1 on mother

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Indira Renganathan 17 July 2009

A good poem on mother.....10+++

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Dave Tanwar

Jodhpur, India
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