Thursday, December 11, 2008

A Day Untitled Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dew sparkled like a thousand jewels
as the rising sun bathed each blade of grass.
The promise of a summer day
as the morning began to pass.
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Jack Turner 11 December 2008

Love the atmosphere here, particularly as you set it up in the first half, very ambient!

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James Mclain 11 December 2008

A true flowing of harmony wind in your spirt....Thank you for the privilege of reading your pen...

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David Harris

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