A Day To Start With.... Comments

Why our day starts with beautiful music in ear? Why it doesn’t fail even for single day in year? Cuckoo airs melody at an appointed hour.. with nice things always....10

Why our day starts with beautiful music in ear? Why it doesn’t fail even for single day in year? Cuckoo airs melody at an appointed hour... nicely worded and must be adhered to....10

Nature never deserts us and offer fine place How easily we can forget and replace? We can act thankless and invite the wrath It is one step away from loosing faith Nice poem it deals with human nature actaully -the many facets of our character, human being. and this verse, to me served as the focal point of the whole poem...the question on what we are doing to our 'mother earth', thus, the reality of pain and sorrow and all the unpleasant realities in our world is the cause of our human tendencies. all the best

Thank you so much for writing this poem, I can relate to every word of it, 10 and will become my favorite.

If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we? Why we remove the trees and make them refugee We loose the shed and they loose the home We know nothing and aimlessly roam this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

very nice and creative poem. lovely to read.

Good nature poem, imagination.