A Day To Be Remembered Comments
It was a day that i wished i should not be angered,
it was a day i wished i could join a neaw team, or maybe be a new member.
All my bliss was in my palms and my fingers,
i was playing my favourate position the winger.
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U have a few typos/spelling errors in here U have a nice opening para In the second u try to make some interesting comparisons but u lose ur way thru spelling nd gramatical errors In all u could have done better Liked it tho Keep rocking \m/
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7/26/2025 3:36:25 PM # 1.0.0
good writing.... the rhythm is good.... and the meaning inside is good too.... good Job.... Go On