A Day Of Spring Comments

my favorite poems are short and to the point. nicely penned

A beautiful spring hauiku of perfection. Enjoyed.

I can't really explain why, but i like this haiku. most haikus are like that i guess. i occassionally write what Kerouac called American Haiku - same concept, but it doesn't have to follow the 5-7-5 rule. as long as it says something profound or a unique observation in 3 short lines. well done here. -R-

Asif, you write these brief, sharp pictures excelently.

From what I've heard about springs, UI'd say it is an admirable season. You are indeed a good writer of Haiku, it's good to find someone else that takes so much pride in writing it. Well done.

Very nice with good sentiment. Hope you are going ok Asif. Thank you for your friendliness. I will have to write some new poems. They have fixed this site now I can use it again. I forgot my password and got busy and forgetfull. Greetings friend